Replace internal wording in the weekly backlog summary
Demo improvement · Across launch phases · Completed work and checks
Completed and verified on October 14. The corrected wording is included in this demo build; use the October 14 update to check the recorded sentence and review counts.
Completed one wording correction on October 14: the opening sentence of A visible work queue now reads “The demo backlog contains 51 curated stories:”. The rest of that paragraph and the 18/13/20 review snapshot were preserved. The app-copy scan found no other visible internal-documentation mentions.
Implementation status is separate from stakeholder approval and publication.
Goal
As a person reviewing weekly demo progress, I want the backlog summary to describe the app directly so the wording is clear without knowledge of internal project records.
The wording change
Where: Progress updates → A visible work queue → opening sentence
Previous wording · internal reference omitted
The current … and demo agree on 51 curated stories:
The omitted words named internal documentation; that private reference is omitted from this historical excerpt.
Revised wording
The demo backlog contains 51 curated stories:
Expected result: The opening describes the demo backlog directly. The rest of the paragraph and the 18/13/20 review snapshot remain unchanged.
How to check
- Open Check the corrected backlog sentence; it should land at A visible work queue.
- Read the opening sentence and compare it with the revised wording shown on this story.
- Confirm the review snapshot beneath it still shows 18 Ready to review, 13 In progress and 20 Planned or later.
Completion criteria
- The opening sentence describes the demo backlog directly.
- The remaining paragraph and October 14 review snapshot stay unchanged.
- The content source retains the correction when refreshed.